Pete is cast as the lead role in a vampire movie he didn't audition for and he and Jenemazzi are flown to a far away country. Spooky things start happening which lead Pete and Jenemazzi to suspect that movie's vampire is a real monster!
Very nice
And here was a nice film you seem to always make some nice animations pretty long one here but I liked it and it has a good vibe about it I have no improvments this time just make more great films anyways nice job
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Well as mentioned nothing major needs changing
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I like your reviews. They're very thoughtful and kind. I'm happy you appreciate my work. Have a wonderful day sir Wayne.
Pretty mediocre. It just felt like an excuse to have a cliff hanger. It was to short. Also is it only me or dose it feel like galaxy man is going to be behind the door. That would be pretty bad ass.
Eighteen minutes is insanely long for an animated web series made by one person, believe you me. People complained that the last episode was actually too long, so I split this one into two parts. Sorry you didn't enjoy it. Like I said, you should probably find a new show to watch. You clearly don't like Yonder Ho very much.
Your backgrounds have always been my favorite visual element of the yonder ho series; However, a lot of it's moving parts were a bit distracting.
It sometimes took attention away from your characters.
Your backgrounds can both look cool and assist with bringing increased attention to your characters.
Think of the background as creating an invisible frame.
Work on training your audience to pay most attention to the important parts.
Your characters will need to behave in ways to attract attention to themselves.
This might mean hair and clothes moving in the wind but slightly faster than the background plant life.
I don't often see plant life moving in the wind included in a whole lot of animation.
moving backgrounds was a cool addition and I hope my criticism will help create improved new episodes.
This series is really good and pleased to notice that you never settled on the same battling average.
Your always trying to make the show better and it has shown in your work.
I hope your future movies start winning awards and front page placement.
Keep up the good work and I hope my small bit of criticism helps.
-Mightydein
Thank you so much for watching! I completely respect your criticisms and appreciate the honest feedback. You are truly the best kind of fan :)
The look of this episode was very experimental. Maybe you're right, though. Maybe there is too much movement. With the new episode I'm working on I've been messing around with blur effects to try to take focus off of the backgrounds so maybe that'll make things a bit better.
Front page you say? You're very kind, but I don't think I'm there quite yet hehe. Maybe if I keep listening to you, huh ;)
Been a while since the last episode! This seems almost like a brand new start to this series, especially at the beginning, with that impressively classy musical composition, and the animation's becoming more and more with the moving scenery, rain, etc, and is still all Paint?! All the more impressing if it is. Plenty of comedy as always. I'm looking forward to both the continuation of this and that little critter's crazy Moonbase run. :) Great work!
-cd-
Oh man that was lovely! Thank you so much for watching and giving such a kind and thoughtful review as always. I always like hearing what you have to say about these cartoons of mine. And yes, for the most part everything is still done in Paint. Thanks again :^)