I liked this, he became a superhero. How about doing another superhero origin story with a character that I will hopefully show to the artist of this story one day?
Omega: Episode 1
Episode 2:
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/713727
Episode 3:
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/714023
Omega: Episode 1
The past and the future collide: Devin Hawkins, stumbles upon an ancient power that can change the world.
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Semi reboot of my series. Many fair complaints from people who said "I have no clue what is going on." So, I did an official first episode with subtle hints to the overall story. And from here on out I'm going to continue from this episode.
Once again "ugh this took forever". Started back in, oh, you know...November....of 2013! School, among other things, got in the way. Also, this was planned to be made with 2 other episodes, back to back. But, in the middle of working on this, I had to do a complete rewrite of the story. This pushed back everything nearly half a year.
I've found a better process of animating recently though. So, hopefully the next episode doesn't take as long.
I'm very, very, satisfied with the overall episode and hope to only improve from here :) Stay tuned!
Thanks to: SailorSilverStar, and Sunilvoice.
Future episodes are going to require more voice actors (my lame voice appears way too much in this episode). If this is something you would be interested in, I'll be posting characters to try out for the coming months. So, keep an eye out for that.
Let me know what you think in the comments below! Constructive criticism welcomed!
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Running Time: 7 minutes
FPS: 30
Made with Flash CS3
Edit: Wow the daily feature and Front page?! I know that's not a big deal for some, but ever since I started posting animations on newgrounds that's been my dream. Thanks for all the support Newgrounds community.
I think it has a lot of potential. At the beginning the frame rate looked a little off, but it looked like you fixed it later on. The female voice actor could have used some work and at times the animation was a little stiff, but overall I think it was very well done. The story seems pretty interesting, and there was some nice foreshadowing done by the professor at what I assume is a college. I do have one more problem though. You didn't really explain how the world works. You went about halfway and then you kind of stopped. For example when they were playing what I'll refer to as sport ball, that guy had super speed, but none of the other players did. So is it the suit or do some people have powers? But, you did do a lot of stuff right like that action, that was close to perfect. So I'll give you four and a half stars. Excited for the next episode! Keep up the good work.
JTmovie responds:
The sport is called Powerball and basically in this future a small percentage of the population has super powers, making it difficult for non powered players like Devin, to compete. The people having powers thing will be explored in upcoming episodes with how it relates to crime.
This episode was sort of a taste of those ideas, but mainly focused on how the overall story will play out with the past and the future. Thanks for the review and observations!
awesome
The animation isn't perfect, but is still impressive for the sheer length of it. The art style is awesome, reminds me of DC cartoons like Batman Beyond or Teen Titans or something. Sound editing was good, I didn't even notice how few voice actors there were until I read the comments! I'm excited to see the next one, keep it up!
JTmovie responds:
Wow I guess my voice acting isn't so bad then lol Thank you!
I love it!
