A pretty silly clip, I had a good chuckle!
My main complain is the artwork and graphics on the character, specifically the way his anatomy looks. The presentation is just stellar!
A brilliant great start, keep up the good work!
Have been learning to, 2D animate using Jazza's training material and Adobe flash. This is my first attempt of my 15 seconds of comedy video. I know that some people will think this character looks like Jazzas guy but it wasn't supposed to but anyways, I did draw it from scratch and I have tried to make it look more like me but anyways I did try. Happy for some honest feedback of this animation ....
A pretty silly clip, I had a good chuckle!
My main complain is the artwork and graphics on the character, specifically the way his anatomy looks. The presentation is just stellar!
A brilliant great start, keep up the good work!
This was pretty good for your 1st attempt. Although I believe there should be more animation put into the character's movement. But I can see that effort was put into this and that is what I like to view! Keep up the practice!
Thanks for your feedback. I have until this animation been focusing primarily on the movement of the mouth but in this animation, I tried to put alot more facial expressions such as jaw movements, eye brows etc but you are right I need to invest more into eye expressions and body movement as well. Appreciate the feedback....back to more practice.
dear ChrisLeRoy
Well that was...Alright but frankly its not that funny. I was half expecting this to have a scintillating impact to make up for its short length but it was not met. You can do better, try to make it a little bit longer or even better, try to improve upon this idea but with a more grandiloquent outcome. Something easily memorably impactful that is both hilarious and clever at the same time JUST to make up for the 15 second comedy sketch you're making.
I might be asking to much for you as judging from this animation and gleaning from your descriptions and profile; you might be new to this but still you can do better. Anyways, well done for the animation; I for one don't have the knack and courage to make one so I commend your efforts and cheers! ;)
PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions
Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton
Thankyou for your honest opinion.. the joke fell short and I appreciate you taking the time to say that. Its actually all good.. you are right this is my most complex animation I have done to date. What I am proud of is that you were happy with my animation, not my content and that is something I will work on, so thank you for sharing... I appreciate... Hopefully you will conquer Youtube...keep at it.