I really like it! And the voice is awesome! Not completing the story, actually can be an idea. You can try yo put more choices in the story, but don't give it an end. Like, YOU don't want it to have an end. That way you can use your problem in a good way. Anyway, I really like.
Hope you keep the good work!
(Sorry if you didn't understand something or I used words that doesn't exist. I'm still working in my english.)
Well, it's not finished. Even if you explained as much, why even put it up? You can't progress past the first "event" (unless it's negatively). Even with this shortcoming, it seems like this would be pretty interesting if it were actually finished, or even just polished slightly.
Kind of like the Henry Stickmin series, inspired from it? I liked the narration and animation is okay. Would have like to seen a full game or a proper demo. Anyway good job! Unfortunate that stuff happened.
i REALLY hate when flash just crash (it looks like you are using the macromedia flash 8) i did a game like that, it was for my français class but guess what it crashed, and i lost a lot of time doing a lot of things: fixing errors, adding parts to my game, lipsync and other things. i did the game when i was like ten i think was about "La famille Tortue" yes i add justin beaver and a black guy we met like boyfriends and justin bieber poisoned his parents (the turtle) so armed with a shotgun it killed justin bieber, good times.
Its late here is colombia (like 10:54 UTC-05:00) so goodbye...
Very cool choise game!