You show a lot of potential in your work so far.

The previous submission watched while bad shows a very high level of potential to be very successful.

I really like the cute character designs.

Your characters are really cute.

If you can get your buttons to work than you can easily create a very interesting game.

Do you have flash?

A game could be created from primitive action script.

You have a very cool idea and I would like to see you become a lot more successful.

You are off to a better start than most other artists on this site.

-Mightydein