The main issue I had was the interlacing in this video. Whenever something moves there is a horizontal stripped ghost effect from the previous frame. This could be fixed easily by experimenting with the video codecs you use when exporting the movie.
There was a fair lack of sound effects for much of the animation, it was mostly just music and ambience sounds.
The first part seemed somewhat well animated but the amount of frames in each shot fluctuates quite a bit. E.g. When the guy put his foot on the pedal, that could use some more frames to make it smoother.