Very interesting piece of work.
Considered stopping midway (wasn't particularly engaging for me) but decided to stick it through to the end to try and piece together what it was all about.
Some of the art and visual concepts were quite fascinating to interpret, but overall I felt that the style could have been a bit cleaner among other things, and often presented barriers to my understanding the work and being engaged with the story.
Points of redemption earned for use of action and change of pace towards the end, along with a poignant ending to the story. Keep trying!