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Hey everyone! This is my first test using Adobe Flash, I can't really considered it a movie, but here it is, just to say hello to you guys. I'm spanish so at the beginning I meant "Meanwhile in the other part of the universe..."

Hope you like it!


The animating is really good. I'm just gonna state the obvious here and say that it could have been longer, but since it was just a test I'm gonna ignore that. My rating is based solely on the quality of the of the animation and what you could do with it.

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todoquisqui responds:

Thanks man! I will put more effort on my next proyect this summer because now I don't have to much time to spend in this, but this is so much fun!

Not bad for a first animation, it would have helped if you made it longer though. :)
I'm feeling nice today, so 3 stars. if I was in a bad day, I would have probably given you 2.

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todoquisqui responds:

Thanks for sticking around. It's just a test but you are right, I have to develop my on stories

Lacks substance, it's a pretty empty flash with nothing really happening in it.
Maybe spend more time creating a story and improving your style and since Newgrounds is a mostly English speaking website it would probably be better if any future animations from you were in English.

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todoquisqui responds:

Thanks for the advice... That's what I thought. It's just a test to how to use the program but I see what you say. I have a lot of stories in my head but I felt like I had to finish something and post it.

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2.38 / 5.00

May 13, 2015
3:38 AM EDT