funny sounds XD

slightly enjoyed.different sound effects would be good but for a first animation it was good.

For a first time it's... mediocre? It looked like ti might have been alright, but then the sound effects mixed with half of it just being next to a tree with a box over her lower half not really moving... I'l have to pass on this one.

Well I like it because it was kind of like my new movie The animation was kind of rough and the art work was okay. Keep up the good work.

I start to wonder if she has machine guns attached to her feet with your choice of sound effect for her walking.

What also strikes me is that this joke would bore a kindergartner, the demographic I believe you were aiming this towards given the subject matter and the lack of any real punchline at the end. She fell asleep. Aaaand therefore what happened? What was supposed to be funny if she fell asleep? Did she fall in her feces, did she end up asleep in an embarrassing position, what was supposed to be funny about this?

I will give forgiveness for the animation and art given your inexperience, but it's just not funny. I would even give credit if I saw the effort to be funny and just didn't think it was particularly funny. But there is little effort to be comedic, and that is why I have to give one star.