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A small practice animation I did, not really sure where the inspiration came from.
I was mainly practising my lip-syncing and sound mixing with this one, it looks like I didn't finish it but considering it's a couple years old I decided to just upload it as is.
Feed back would be appreciated, if you'd like to use my animation please give me credit.
Thank you.
this isnt't that good of a animation i didn't found it intresting. it is only a edless repeating cycle of a animation that doesn't contains a story.
snowy665 responds:
Did you happen to read the description? I did explain that this is a two year old, unfinished project. I've been told it should have gone in the Dumping Grounds which I unfortunately didn't know about at the time of this submission.
good animation, but is it supposed to repeat forever?
snowy665 responds:
Thank you for your feedback, no I imagine my original plan was to have it cut off at some point...however this is largely unfinished.
a very good animation, tho i might add a few errors here and there:
-the heavy-man's face was too simple, if you we compare it to the medic's super-detailed awesome face.
was that planned to happen? to show us that heavies are brutes, and therefore they have simple/bland faces?
if so, good call.
-an other mistake was that this didnt have any play/replay button, or a preloader.
this looped, and a loop doesnt look like a good movie, even if IT IS a good movie! (and your movie IS a v. good movie.... really)
so, all in all, if you added a play/replay button, if you also added more scenes, or a final punchline (even for a short movie like this), and a solid ending/preloader, this would be so much better.
other than that, it was awesome. you did a good job.
keep making stuff like this, you have the skills.
snowy665 responds:
Hey thanks a lot for the feedback I really appreciate it :)
The Medic's face is more detailed than the Heavies probably due to the source images I was using as a reference, maybe I was just lazy with the heavy I can't remember to be honest.
I likely intended to do a pre-loader at some point but as this project is so old I decided to just submit it as is, maybe one day I'll come back and finish it but no plans to do it soon sorry.
Thanks again for your kind words and feedback!
Well, the thing about this short is that it is REALLY short, almost too short to be a short. The other thing is that it keeps on looping over and over again.
snowy665 responds:
Yeah I'm afraid this is a very old project that didn't see completion, the original plan was to do lot's more with the animation and voice work but it just never happened.
Same goes for the lack of pre-loader, play/replay buttons etc.
I found this recently and decided to upload it as is, I might finish it some day but no plans to do it soon.
Thanks for the feedback!