Quit the corner cutting. And get help. Art ain't for the faint of heart, kid! It takes monumental work. Go back and re do some of these scenes. This cheapens the whole thing for everyone who busts some serious tail to get a piece pulled together. You have a story to tell here. Take the months to do it right. Use the forums and make better work. Trust me you'll get better with advice and you can get there from here.