This was just kind of a thing I did out of boredom and to practice my animation. I had fun doing it, and I guess it came out ok. Let me know what you think. (also that thing in his hand is a phone)
Simple, but funny!
Although it was pretty simple and short; the final outcome of the flash made it all worth while. I expected and ending kind of like this, but not exactly happening the way it did. Good job on surprising me!
A suggestion for next time; you could have your character doing a little more movement. Just would improve the short, I think.
Good work.
3/5
-rebellyus
I think it was good. It looked like the guy was playing Flappy birds, I understand it was a phone. The finger gun thing reminded me of a scene in the movie "The Losers". Not sure if I was supposed to laugh, but I did. So for a quick animation, I thought it was good. Definitely would like to see more content from ya. Perhaps longer in the future though.
Not bad. Pretty decent animation and decent humor. Keep it up!
That turned dark quckly...
Pros~
Dark humor
Made me laugh
Good 1st attempt
Cons~
Could've added voice overs
Make a more "Flashy" finish not just "Top Hats Deluxe"
The title could be better tbh
Wow, thanks for the feedback! I agree with you on the finish and voiceover Unfortunately, I had a really sore throat at the time of recording, so it would of been sub-par.