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Fly Way

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This animation dates back to 2013, for a college stuff.
Cost 1 month of work, and despite having a lot of technical errors, a loose animation, and a lousy audio, still seems to me that it turned well.

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Hah, if ever that happened in real life! XD I thought the fly'd endlessly attempt that attack on the window, one first long rush and then again, and again, faster and faster... glad it shattered my expectations and surprised! Really nice short.

-cd-

SmokingFrog responds:

I'm glad you like it! Cool idea, by the way. If i manage to do a remake, I'll use it 😉

The graphical effects and the way of expression was nice, but the storyline was a little weird and un-twisted, I really expected the window's cracking to stop just as it seemed enough, that would have been amusing to me, also, when the fly was trying to take a boost from the table, it was not clear, finally, the man's reaction seemed a little excessive, and people typically don't say "NOOOO" unless it's something that they have been paying attention to and hoping for for a while.

SmokingFrog responds:

Yes, totally. I always want to re-edit, and because this script was assigned, I also want to re-script it.. like a director's cut, or something alike. Thanks for the review 😉

Cool execution but bad main idea.

SmokingFrog responds:

I agree. I had to follow a particular script, that was pretty restrictive. (I have to recognize that at the end, I was too lazy to edit it, so I uploaded as it is).

Hmm, very interesting art style you made it with.

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Score
3.92 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 8, 2015
1:50 AM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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