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Detective Salanski

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This was my submission for the 2nd round of TOFA 2014. Actually ended up making this within 2 days before the deadline so it might look a bit rough.

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This is pretty clever. The jokes were a bit dry, but I enjoyed the literal description follow-ups. The character designs were certainly odd, which added greatly to the charm and immediately sets the tone.... until Potatoman. I'm sorry, but the super-villainy suddenness was TOO jarring within the setting, as strange as it was, and the anti-climactic wrap-up left me feeling disappointed. In light of the fact that you did this in only 2 DAYS, I think it's otherwise marvelous.

Heh, though he didn't really do a thing, he solved the case! The one thing it feels you could really improve here is the voicing for the detective character, though I know it's supposed to be a certain way, the monotone-low-serious type of talk isn't the easiest to catch in this one, might have to do with the added reverb, might just be the tone of voice, but it's not as audible as it could be. How about trying more of a high-pitch filter instead to make it stand out, if you do keep the tone? Animation was great though, creative colors, keep it going!

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was ok. one thing that caught me off gaurd was his boss.

Poor voice acting and bad timing. I guess the pronouncing needed work.

Now for the good news!

The potato man is worth 3 stars right there. I shwish I thought of that!

I like the detective, that one guy with the bodyguard, someone with pickles.

And don't forget about how all those cops shot that guy instead of arresting him. Classic!

10/10 worlds best detective

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Dec 28, 2014
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