This is pretty clever. The jokes were a bit dry, but I enjoyed the literal description follow-ups. The character designs were certainly odd, which added greatly to the charm and immediately sets the tone.... until Potatoman. I'm sorry, but the super-villainy suddenness was TOO jarring within the setting, as strange as it was, and the anti-climactic wrap-up left me feeling disappointed. In light of the fact that you did this in only 2 DAYS, I think it's otherwise marvelous.