really good the movement were very lively its a good story and its a decent length

excellent true story:) keep trying never give up, nice lesson learned you can try all you want and never win but you are getting better and at the same time other parts of your life are improving. Thx I needed inspiration like this)

I liked it a lot more after I found out it was a true story!! XD Very well animated and I love the effects and voices! I think you should improve on your keyframes a little but very high quality!

Finally, I find a personal story animation that's actually interesting and...well...ANIMATED! A popular trend just seems to be making lazily animated, or even just not animated period, tellings of some boring moment(s) in one's life. But finally I see something that's not just intriguing and inspiring, but impressively animated. Great work and good message.

You're good, but maybe you're telegraphing all your moves.