Too short, more colors and a background as binyom said, maybe show him perform other activities.
A very short video about a happy guy with Leprosy disease
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This is what i would consider my first real flash movie,
it was done in a day so it's of cource also very short, hope i managed to provoke a grin anyhow
Too short, more colors and a background as binyom said, maybe show him perform other activities.
Hopefully he doesn't hear about the pitfalls of the disease.
I like the art style but this is too short to be very entertaining. Perhaps the poor fella could be shown trying to do more everyday things but finding loosing limbs to be a little distracting or something. For a first flash it's very good though, don't give up, just add to it, some music & sound FX and see just how much you could make people laugh! :)
it was good, despite the gruesome reality...
you created a grin, so keep on doing those!