I'm going to be honest with you. I'm sorry but I find it very hard to understand. Perhaps maybe I'm dull-minded. As for the audio it sounded a bit repetitive and it seemed a bit off timing. As far as animation goes it wasn't good nor bad. A solid "3 Stars". My suggestions take your time with your creations, art is essential to that ideal. Anyways I hope my comment is well transcribed in its context.
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First attempt at animation....
on a peaceful summers day everything is disturbed by a raving mad zombie....
he tells the story of what a scary black monster has done to him only to be interrupted and told as a liar...
What was the real truth..??
purplehermit responds:
it is a progeressive learning of the program.. im no animator personally, i think its a pretty good start for my first animation.!
If you want to post constructive critisims im happy for that... but dont berate my work.
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