Animation was passable, with a few oddities here and there. Character's look fine. As far as the dialogue displayed this time around and the premise as a whole, it just reeks of uninspired. Don't get me wrong, ALS awareness is great and everything but ideally in terms of flash animations many around the site have provided there own unique twist on the shorts that not only raised awareness but also gave me and many others a very entertaining watch. That being said, audio quality was passable but the dialogue just didn't do it for me, this is one of the more weaker "let's do an ice bucket flash because everyone else is doing it" ordeal. I understand this is your first submission, and make no mistake I think you have some potential for some solid shorts in the future, but as it stands I've seen better, I've seen worse.