Review: the animations smooth and the music fits Comment: hopefully you build a story from this

very well done, despite the use of garry's mode....
nice design, and nice background, i wonder what the backstory is behind this....
this seems very ineteresting, and well-animated....

keep up the good work! i would like to watch more

monotone opening voice.... no thanks please hire someone who can actually protray emotions

I personally can't really get over anything that is half life based which isn't 110% over the top awesome because I compare it to half life and man tough all to lt this pass my standards.

Work on it a little.