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this is like some of those infomertial LOL
There is a lot I want to comment about, firstly, the idea is definately not well thought of. Something more complex would be nicer.
Next you have already have main idea of drawing, just that I know your using a computer mouse to draw. It feels kind of akward drawing like that. Try find a digital drawing tablet, it simulates pen movements smoothly.
Lastly, try to voice act in a more quieter area, I can hear voices in the background.
I think you have potential though, a lot of potential actually.
Hope you luck in the future.
that was a older animation so i used the mouse but i already have a tablet. right now though im using the family computer and i will get a laptop soon thx for giving me some tips
This just was not funny. Also the voice seems a bit unfitting for the character. Good try though.
Sorry, but other than the half decent art, this video was not very good at all <_<. You sound like youre younger, so youve got plenty of time to improve. Keep on practicing!
Needs work on vocal volume other than that good job animating.
that was ok I guess. first off to the kid recording audio, next time do it WITHOUT people talking in the background. if this is your first flash then not bad, but if this isn't... smh
im working on getting a laptop so i can record stuff in my room without the tv on and the chatter in the backround thx
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