I made this animation like 10 months ago, just used my basics :p Enjoy :)
Well...
It's pretty short, DBZ sound effects has been done to death already. Animation is decent, but graphics needs a bit more improving. I could see you're just starting out and that's just fine. I would recommend going to the forums and submit this movie to the Dumping Grounds and showcase it there. From there, people can offer you criticism and feedback.
Good luck out there!
Thank you very much, means a lot! And yes, im just starting, i dont have good sources of sound effects, and i didnt put effort on the characters design, but i'll make them better, seriously thanks!
Great animation, but it´s a bit short
What's with the lack of pre-loaders and excessive amount of looped videos on NG right now. There is a free pre-loader you can download from Newgrounds and I suggest you just throw that in front of your video before you submit.
A lot of users like myself dislike that looped animations as we have to right click and stop the video (just seems a bit obnoxious to me) and in the end I deduct points for that.
Also, I noticed you used DBZ effects, should somewhere state that).
Other than that, it was sort of funny I guess... The animation itself wasn't terrible although I wish the characters were better designed.
Regardless, 3/5 stars for this.
Thanks,
Bradley
thank you! this will help me to improve!! I've some problems with ng loaders, so sorry about that
WTF I just saw?!!??
............it is okaaaaay but just not something for newgrounds