Holy crap dude was this really your first film? Your character design, smears and movements were great. All you gotta work on now is your audio quality and perhaps adding a little more detail in your backgrounds and you'll be spot on.
Hello newgrounds, this is my first ever contribution to the site. I made my account 2 years ago, but never used it. This is the first animation I've ever made, it took me 7 days and no sleep, but after all that effort, it's finally finished.
The voices are mine (except for the scream).
Happy harry, spazkid and oney tutorials were very helpful.
Feedback is welcome.
Holy crap dude was this really your first film? Your character design, smears and movements were great. All you gotta work on now is your audio quality and perhaps adding a little more detail in your backgrounds and you'll be spot on.
Thanks so much for the review, you're too kind.
he ate food off the ground, burst into bits, and lived to tell the tale
Rather, the omniscient narrator told the tale for him. I need to structure my shorts better.....
Just Don't put it in your mouth! Your gonna get sick real quick.