It's a good start, I suppose.

The clothes lack and type of shading or depth, and the hair is just wonky.

I also hope you got permission to use the background and template from the people who made them.

I feel like this could be funny if the outfits are changed to stock characters. Like trailer park girl, trucker girl, alien girl, japanese princess. And maybe you could add an voice clip to play after their dressed that matched the character. For example you put the girl in an oily tee and trucker hat, she says "Get R Done"

Pretty cheesy for me.