I can see what you are trying to do as far as style and I love it....the only problem seemsto be the rendering.....you are clearly a skilled animator...personally I would use a program like DAZ 3D or Poser to get the higher quality render without having to pay tons of money for a better computer....but if that's not your thing I would recommend getting an more powerful computer to fix the problem...but other than that it was great keep up the good work