I liked it! Keep it up :p
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(I be damned if this submission doesn't get blammed for being so pointless lol)
-two friends attempt to make their summer interesting by doing all sorts of things-
Like I said, this was supposed to be my first full length animation. Also, If you've noticed, there are some frames slightly out of place. I don't know how to fix that. I was going to finish it until my PC started going all loo on me... "music's too fast, animation going slow, oh no flash crashed, HEY where did it go??" so fluff it!
bahah apologies for the inconsistent art style. I sort of took my time making this and experimented on it a bit.The real purpose of me making this was to test my flash skills and to see if my character designs are good enough. I don't know how to close this description so lets just leave it with a question. What do you guys think of this?
JellyJubJubs responds:
YAUS <u>
This is beyond front page material. You're going places.
That was a really good beginning! I was surprised at the high quality this little flash showed! Your drawing skills are good, you are good at using the music to your advantage and the scene was funny. Until it just ended abruptly.
It seems like you had a great start and put a lot of work into it, but then got tired and gave up.
DON'T GIVE UP! You have talent! Plan your work in advance. It doesn't have to be long. You just have to decide what you want your movie to contain and then keep working until you have included all of it.
I suggest reading whatever feedback you get here, discard anything that isn't constructive, then take this flash down and work until it's finished. You can do it! Ganbare! ;)
JellyJubJubs responds:
high quality? with the inconsistent art style o_o bah xD
that's actually true, when things got really tedious and my pc started going ape loo I just started getting the urges to give up.
how could i not read the reviews?? I have to xD if I want to improve, reading reviews is a must!
you don't get blammed for being pointless. you get blammed because somebody out there hates you for no reason. you could draw a masterpiece of art and they will still blam you out of pure undeserving hatred towards you. thats why i hate this site. the people who are here are pretty aweful. however this is a great place to get noticed. and you have a lot of options at your disposal here. functionally it's pretty good. socially, it's a monster. if everyone worshipped you, you could draw a dancing shit that is just a loop with a banshee screaming and rate it 5 and stuff......
oh right! i'm supposed to review this flash!
i don't know how you got that far. when i use flash, it will crash (that rhymed! except this time instead of bringing me joy, rhyming hath made me miserable!). the fact that you got one line to do what you want shows your greatness. and the fact that you made a full animation makes you a god. a hail whatsyurname!!!
ONE MORE THING!!!
um. are you supposed to draw on illustrator first, then import it to professional? or are you supposed to draw within professional? because i keep getting assumptions that your supposed to draw your cartoon on illustrator first and then import it to professional then animate it there. it's so confusing! i have both btw and a lot more.
JellyJubJubs responds:
I actually agree with what you said lol NG has a really tough crowd and is really hard to please but thats what makes this place nice. It's challenging. It may be hard at first but once you get to know the tricks here, It'll be a lot easier to get known.
haha the infamous flash crash, don't I know it! It gets tedious, always having it crash but once you get used to it, you'll be able to make progress! haha
hah...whats an illustrator o-o the only way I know how to animate is to just..draw and animate in flash xD Drawing in illustrator and then importing it into flash could work too :)) but it's not really something you have to do.
for a first full length animation this definitely isnt bad! its pretty cute in my opinion i'd like to see the kinds of things you could make as you get more experience
JellyJubJubs responds:
thanks! I'm glad to hear that. I'm also glad that you like it too! Maybe some day you'll see my work on NG's most popular! hah kidding (dreaming big lol) really, thank you for your kind words :))
