Maybe work on story and characters actually talking since this made little sense it was so random but I found the animations awesome!
Fat-Ash Adventures EP1
Say hello to Fat-Ash, the moderately obese hero of Kanto!
I plan to make this eventually into a series.
Made in Flash CS6
This is my first animation I have ever published
My New Youtube
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCqycMFkWrep69SFpaw7YcNA
Thank you for any reviews I am aware the animation is kind of choppy and laggy at times and the color is a bit desaturated but this is completely because of export issues, it works perfect on my program, I still don't know how to properly convert stuff =_=
Haha, I had to look away and say "Wtf" at the first 10 seconds. I found it to be hilarious.
Maybe work on the audio sounds so they're easier to listen to, but great first animation either way!
I will follow you in hopes of seeing this "series"!
Well that was one hell of a pokemon adrenaline rollercoaster! I like the humor in this and the overal animation is not bad. keep it up!
Not bad for your first animation but, the screams are anoying as hell. Either don't put in screams or don't scream that loud into the mic and just alter the volume more or something.
I could tell what was going to happen to ash at the very end, but still couldn't help but laugh. Even the most simple slap stick humor can work when done well.
