Okay, so the ending joke about the daughter was really the only thing that got me to laugh, and the guy on the lefts mouth is very different from the guy on the right(One shows the inside of the mouth and the other doesn't, but they are both at the same angle) The art was not really that well done either, but I mean that's pretty much expected when you start animation. Other than that, there is a lot of potential for future animations. Good luck dude!