animation was awful...but it was actually quite good. so not bad, my tips would be to take more time drawing characters and try storyboarding to get better results.
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I understand that newgrounds may not be the place to upload a fanimation but I just basically uploaded this here because I wanted to some constructive critisism/tips etc and to just bring life to my newgrounds account thank you if you watched and I hope you enjoy
bennybloxxy responds:
Haha thanks man Dont worry I aint one of those "YOU DON'T KNOW SHIT" kinda people I can take crititism when need be :P thanks for watching my first animation though :) and I am trying right now to draw a bit better and I hope in the near future that my ideas can truly come to life :)
poorly animated, but I can't say I didn't laugh.
So take it for what it's worth
Great job for a GG animated but the poor audio draws away from the content. Work on your audio!
This Flash Was amazing :D But I sugest adding A Preloader! http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/preloaders/
I gave you a 4, because i felt you could do more with this, but it's not horrible and it's unique.
It would have been nice if you put a stop code at the end and a replay button. also watch your audio and try to make your characters more detailed. This is only okay.
bennybloxxy responds:
Thanks for the advice bro and yeah I am still working out the audio side of flash have not got quite used to it yet :)
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1.50 / 5.00
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- Jan 14, 2014
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