Animation is hard and takes time so dont give up. You will get better. Im happy to teach you some things but note I use Flash 8. and for sound I use Adacity.
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This is my first ever fIash animation with a story. It is pretty bad but atleast I tried.
You may want to put your volume low, because the second scene gets pretty loud. Sorry about that.
Also, I have no idea why Alex's mouth is moving while he enters the scene at the beginning. I don't know how to fix it, so sorry about that too.
Anyway, please enjoy it and review it as well! Critism is allowed so I can improve next time, but don't be so harsh since this is pretty much my first real try at animation.
Expect more episodes of Stick Dicks to come soon!
PsychoZoid responds:
I made this animation almost three years ago but thanks for the review. And sure, I would love for you to teach me some things on animating in Flash. :-)
The pacing is slow, and you see jokes coming from a mile away.
PsychoZoid responds:
Thanks for the review. I will improve on the jokes next time, I will promise you that.
Hilarious short pilot episode, I would love to see more. Try to make your voice louder though, please?
PsychoZoid responds:
Thanks! And I will make more episodes. About my voice, I'm recording it with a microphone built into my laptop so that's why the audio quality isn't so good. I think I will have to buy a new microphone, or I might do have one in my home somewhere. But if I have to use the built-in microphone again for my next animation I will try to make my voice louder.
it made me smile but It didn't really make me laugh I think that its a good way to go they just need to work on there material and to get a little better at your animation
PsychoZoid responds:
Thank you for the review. For my next animation, I'm definitely going to take more time on it, and of course, think of better funny material.
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