I think you should work on the drawings and making a more captivating story the cuts from scene to scene where good
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Hi, NGers. It's my first cartoon and i hope that you like this. I please for criticism, i must know what i can improve exept graphic design because i know that it suck.
I think you should work on the drawings and making a more captivating story the cuts from scene to scene where good
well the graphics were poor but at least she seemed happy