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Hi, NGers. It's my first cartoon and i hope that you like this. I please for criticism, i must know what i can improve exept graphic design because i know that it suck.
I think you should work on the drawings and making a more captivating story the cuts from scene to scene where good
well the graphics were poor but at least she seemed happy
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