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GUIAN: The Joke

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Hey guys, been a while since I've posted on here (3 years!), but I have recently got back into making movies with my new crew - geeking it up a notch. So I quickly made this video, as you can tell, not the best. But please have a watch, give me hints and tips of where I went wrong or just tell me what you liked!!

You can see more of us on our youtube channel www.youtube.com/akradon36 0 or just visit our site at www.akradon.co.uk.

Thanks guys

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Joke finish. Sigh by the guys end. That's how it should have played out. Anything after the creeper sucked.

Not really that funny, too many inside jokes

Have to admit not my type of humour but w/e
You doin the hand movement tweeting ? Dunno if its your style but seemed a bit harsh at some parts...
ohh the whine continues.
1:06 what head flashed blue?

well the joke was terrible up until the explosion but was more entertaining than funny but a little polish and this could be good especially around the animation at first i couldn't tell that guy had a beard thought it was a big goofy smile till he made a noise

The intro is nice. The humor was kind of meh though. If this is supposed to be your big debut back after three years, and you know this isn't the best video then post something better! Just a suggestion.

Also, there is a space in your youtube link between the 3 and 6 which brings users to a 404 error screen.

Akradon responds:

Thats strange with the link, when I go to edit it, there isn't a problem but when reading it the space is there :s strange one.

Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the intro :) But this isn't the big debut, this was just to see what hints and tips people could give me for animation really. Then hopefully I can improve from there.