Was good but needs more too it.

Touching. Very Touching indeed

cool, but how anticlimactic!
i was expecting so much more, and such an action packed story, or at least something!
oh well, at least the drawings were good.
next time, add a story, or a joke, or whatever.

It was okay. The intro was a bit confusing because I was pressing play, but unsure if it was working. There could have been a little bit more content wise.