Everything was cool!
The only critique would be the rolling animation
near the end.
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this was made a while ago but are using it for the first time right now for the introduction to our tv spot on public access in our hometown. ~~~ What I want is people to email me at bOoWmAbA@antismart.net if you would be able to make intros or website related things for me similar to this. obviously something could be worked out on paypal, let me know.
Nice, clean 20 second show intro. Simple, stylistic and smoothly animated. Looks like a pretty high frame rate too. If you'd like content, make a post on your userpage and ask, I'm sure there'd be plenty of folks here who'd like their stuff on cable! Extra points for adding the music name and composer to the bottom left.. the animators here at NG should take note!
awesome!
Not bad but not thoroughly good either. I noticed a lot of motion tweening especially near the end and I really shouldn't have to explain why motion tweening sucks by now. I also noticed that not all your outlines are black; that kind of inconsistency is very annoying and since you're using Brush tool and Flash acknowledges that as a color and not as an actual outline, recoloring it shouldn't be difficult at all considering you can just change it all to black with the Paint Bucket tool.
Also, preloader, get one and use it. This very website hands them out for free under Community; Downloads; Flash Loaders and you now have access to a myriad of FLA files each containing a fully functioning, preprogrammed preloader. No augmentations needed, no additional Action Script necessary, just copy and paste that one frame to the first frame of your "Intro For TV Spot" FLA file, albeit you'll have to grab every frame on every layer and drag them all up by a frame, I digress. There's no annoyance quite like an SWF that autoplays as not only can I not stop it, decide when it plays but it can also cause a myriad of other problems like the movie not loading all the way while it plays causing it to stop at the middle or worse it loads its content at different points causing things like the lip syncing to go out of alignment with the audio.
What you have is good. It seems like it should work for your program on TV. The quality is good.
This may not be the best place for this, tho. Once this passes, it'll quickly fall from the actively viewed section. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, or respond much easier than outside email, and hopefully you can find what you want. There are threads set up for just this purpose in the forums.
Good luck! :)