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Flying Revenge

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When birds 'attack' ..

gotta thank kadoyuu. She helped me a lot with this one. Thanks

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haha
a good laugh and fairly well animated
keep it up

yeswekenny responds:

glad you liked it man!

The universe must have hated him for some reason.
Fairly nice animation.
Not much to it though just a guy being killed in an effort to not be defecated on.
And in the end happens anyways.
Work on comedic timing and something called audience predictability.
You could get higher scores if the audience neither sees but tries to expect the next move, and gets something unexpected, that's part of comedy.
Good luck for the next one.

yeswekenny responds:

I'll keep that in mind next time. thanks

Basiclly deciding being killed to getting bird poop is weird.

The little theme and the animation is fine, although the idea itself is not enjoyable at all..

yeswekenny responds:

no he didn't jump infront of a truck on purpose, that's not the idea behind it. he surely didn't want to kill himself to avoid getting shat on.

Wasn't that bad, but the sound is a little late I think. It might be my computer or internet, but check it out. Other then that, keep improving

yeswekenny responds:

must be because it's only one audiofile. used it as an event. but it works on my computer. nothing is off.

Great, but not quite ready. There's a small issue between video and audio. It began when you went to the bird shot, if that helps you any.

yeswekenny responds:

hm for me it works perfectly. it's possible that you have a slow computer and it's laging. I used only 1 audio file for the whole movie, so if it lags the audio simply goes on. that could be the problem.

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3.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 22, 2013
7:14 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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