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Mr Toast

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Please give me honest reviews :D

An adventure full of butter, toast, jam and yummyness

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Needs a lot of work. The game is as glitchy as all hell, so work on that. Also, how do you fight? Need work on that. Very cutesy style. Not too bad, as I'm just assuming it's a first. I may be wrong, though.

good game

Needs a lot of work, concept is cute, needs more animation.

The music was nice, but at this time it's the best part of the game. I'm guessing you didn't use any sprites so I gave you a 2 so as not to be blammed. The controls could use a hell of a lot of improvement. It's just not super interesting. If you want to do a hop and bop it needs to stand out.

Because of my frustration with the physics/control I didn't bother to even try to finish the game.

It's not bad, and a funny concept - but I think you have a good bit more work to do on this one.

you might want to add scores in and change the music around a bit when he dies. The toast idea is cute, and i like how when he walks you see the sides. Personally i wish it was a bit cuter, because of the name, but that might be just me. Its very basic platformer, and the idea is cute. you might want to try and develop it a bit more.

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Votes
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Score
1.99 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 19, 2013
3:03 PM EST