Good animating, bad voice acting and audio quality. Seems like it was inspired by Eddsworld's style but that's no problem but you should try get your own style.
Also like the other guy said make the bodies more proportionate. Keep up the effort though.
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A life changing story of a man writing the most amazing comment on youtube ever.
Everything by me execpt some sound effects which were from www.findsounds.com
brynimation responds:
Thanks man. Yeah, I know the voice acting was kinda bad, but thats because I have hardly any experience with sound, and usually my dad helps me out with the sound. Thanks for the good animation comment. That means alot to me. And as you said, it was inspired by eddsworld, I have been a massive fan since I was nine and started animating in 2011. Eddsworld is the best thing on the interwebs. :)
Great stuff, brynimation. Yeah, it's short. But that didn't matter. It still had some good punch. Keep up the good work and make more!
brynimation responds:
YAAAY! THANKYOU AJIMBO. YOU'RE AWESOME BRO!
It's okay. Work on BODY PROPORTIONS (i'm typin this is all caps, because it's important).
Also, the main character reminds me of Matt Hargreaves for some reason.
brynimation responds:
Thanks. Yeah. The main charactar (the ginger kid) is just a cartoon version of me. Thanks for the advice, I'll try to work on that.
Bad voice acting.
Animation is good but badly ripped off the popular animator EdToons.
brynimation responds:
Sorry dude. I know my style is very similar to Eddsworld, but thats because I am very young and he was an inspiration to me. And the voice acting is bad because my dad usually helps me out, but he was away. I'm sad now.
Lol'd, but... Why it is so short? D:
brynimation responds:
There are 3 reasons why it was so short.
1.) I usually have my dad doing voice acting and helping me with the sound effects, but he was away.
2.) This animation was based on a comic, that was very short, and could only have made a 5 second video at best, so I added to it.
3.) This video was made for fun, and as a test. I wanted to see how well I could add sound effects, and do voice acting. And how long I could animate lip sync for without going crazy (3 hours)
Any way, thanks for the genourus rating. You my friend, are awesome.
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