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This is my first animation ever so be easy on my ok!? Its on YouTube right here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKbeAIWwsZw
Please like and subscribe, or give some feedback so I can make more of this shit. (This is good shit!)

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Dont say shit like "worship me" or whatever. Not even as a joke. It makes you look arrogant and you don't get to be arrogant in your first animation. Try staying humble about your work until you get better.

Jimbobasaur responds:

Thanks, but I was only reflecting on how most popular animators have a 'God' like status, I wasn't trying to be arrogant :) Thanks for the comment :D

How long did you put into this -_- obviously not very long

Jimbobasaur responds:

Sorry, but this was my first time using flash just to see what I could come up with. I'll try harder next time as this was just a little test :]

I think it was a little bit too short. You should add some details on your drawings. For now, it looks like you take only one layer for the corpse of the creature and another one for the arms and make it rotate.

You shouldn't take Minecraft sound for your animation because unless if you're trying to make a Minecraft parody.

Adding a Play button could be good too.

I'm sure you can do better and I hope to see more of you.

Jimbobasaur responds:

Thanks for the feedback :]
This was just my first try on flash to see what I could come up wtih, and I'll try harder next time and hopefully improve with time. I think I also nee to animate some facial expression or lip-sync. :P

This is great for a first animation Jimbobasaur. Keep up the good work :]

Jimbobasaur responds:

Thankyou

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