This was really good. I cringed at the end. Adding onto what everyone else pointed out, you have a clear idea of what you want conveyed to the audience and do an impressive job of doing it too. Your animation just needs a few more frames and a little cleaning up. Will keep an eye out for more. Good luck! :)

Not bad man.

please use color next time for higher ratings....

first off no breaks will be givin, we don't care much for your KIND around here. now that that is out of the way. the animation while not top notch you're still photo's were drawn well, just work on adding frames and more pictures to make them move in a fluint fashion. the audio was alright, while i could understand you clearly, the volume was very low, even more noticble so at the start. over all i rate this 3.5 stars, its very good for a first animation, just keep at it, make more, and soon you will be making 5 star animations.

Aha, the joke was funny. I think a different background would have helped, just the white's quite harsh against black (or even a different brush colour). Voices were also pretty good :D You don't have to take my advice though, I'm sure you'll head in the right direction anyway. You clearly have potential.