pretty good. i like how original and cute it is.
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A moth's love for light... light sources
A 2010 project.
Cute, but how is that a moth? Looked more, sounded more, and acted more like a bee?
AndrePaz responds:
fff yeah, that's true :B
awww so cute!!! :) I love it
Hmmm, a nice quick, succinct animation. Artstyle was cute, content wasn't very plot driven, but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
The sound in my opinion could honestly use some work, as it seems to be just a few stock noises thrown together. I won't get too anal on it though, as it IS a solo project, it's not like there's many resources to find if doing something all alone. My most major peeve would be the fact that some scenes were reused/looped. I think that in this kind of animation, it'd be alright to put just a little more effort into making all original scenes for that extra mile, but then again, that is only my opinion as a reviewer.
As a last thought, the "moth" as described looks a bit like a bee ;3. I just wanted to put that out there. Overall, I enjoyed the piece, good job.~
AndrePaz responds:
Thanks! I appreciate your review very much. Glad to find people who are willing to help with their opinions ;)