At first I thought something was wrong with the audio, but then I read your post. With that in mind, it's a nice piece of animation. The style is basic, but clean. I would work on improving the smoothness of the animation, since right now it is clear when you skip from frame to frame (but since you did it under such time constraints, I have to say I'm impressed with how clean it does look).
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This is just a 10 second short. I intend to exand upon this on a later date. Something that I needed to submit for class, it definitely has more depth in it then what is submitted as of today. This is my first animation short after being out of school for 4 years. I'm still trying to find what really works for me. This was pretty much a speed animation. I lost the original file of this 3 days ago and re did the whole thing between shifts at work and work on other final materials for class. I'm not that happy with it, but I intend to re do it and make it better with the full length of the story. I was only required to do 10 seconds of this animation to pass the class. With the new one, I'll submit audio with it as well.
Songie
songiesworld responds:
Thanks! I'll be doing something with this story line fleshed out. There will definitely be audio then with smoother animation.
Needs audio. Nice animation.
songiesworld responds:
Yes, I intend to re do this animation completely with audio. :-)