it's your FIRST time? it's better than 90% of the other people's first try. I don't rate if the game is good or shitty, I rate if you did your best. 4 stars for you buddy.

Lacks a replay button or more levels and sound. But it's cool for the first game.

Good for your first try, albeit too short. The graphics were nice and simple, but it lacked sounds, music and a replay button. Hearing a 'splat' come from a swatted fly would've been more satisfying. But still, nice!

There's not much I can even say about this flash game. The game seems to be just a simple practice game made by a beginner learning ActionScript in Flash, and is certainly not worthy of a submission to Newgrounds at all. The game is boring, lasts only 30 seconds if that, incredibly generic, and way too simple.

Yes, you will make better games one day, controls worked, nothing wrong with the dynamics, its the game itself that got the score, mind you, I though the intro was very funny, and I did laugh when I was told my assignment was to save his toast.