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ComiX Episode One Pt One

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Oh wow, first place?! Thank you so much everybody for your positive feedback and support. You guys ROCK! Second first place I ever got, and the other one was "PS3 Song", which probably didn't deserve it, but now I have another first to be proud of, and that's all thanks to you :D

ComiX returns, and this time bigger and better than ever.

Google are about to release their new augmented glasses, and it is up to Gordon to begin testing them before deployment, only to find that it's not at all like it is made out to be.

The first part is officially yours to view. Unfortunately my iMac has been stolen, burglers decided to take it while we were out, so it'll be a little while before the next part is done, but rest assured it will be done early next year so keep an eye out guys!

Special thanks to:

Joe Ryan = Grumpy old man

Eddie Bowley = Charlie

Alison Bowley = Sarah

Expect Part two in the first half of 2013! :)

Keep Updated! o0 Will Ryan 0o

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umm...great animation, and i lik the part where that guy gets mad bout the getting bitches part.

this need a second part because you left so much room for improvement
the animation was good but can be better ( especially with the necks)
and also can work in the jokes ( not too bad but ... can be better )
but anyways this have a lot of potential

The jokes weren't bad, and neither was the script. The character's emotions were felt, and the timing was good. There was definite improvment here. for the most part the character designs were nice, and the shading gave them a nice touch. Lil proportional things with the arms could give them more life though, as right now they look pretty blocky. Your mouth shapes were pretty good but the really square ones I wasn't fond of. your sense of motion was good and pretty right on, so props on that stuff. Some of your hands I did like but some of them could use work. Overall good improvment, but keep pushing yourself. Btw that's really shitty about your iMac =(

Keep at it dude!

please do something with the necks

good job on your flash. The chacter's were great the jokes were ok felt like they were rushed (like family going x2). The audio needs a bit of work since it was hard to hear the character's talk over the music. Slow down a bit and everything will be perfect . Also the story plot is great so far.

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Nov 19, 2012
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Comedy - Parody
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