Kyle & Bill - Ep. 3

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This is a few days late for Halloween, I know, but whatever.

Made with MsPaint and Sony Vegas Pro 10.


Yet another creative MS paint animation. I really like how this series is turning out.

A problem I had with this cartoon was that it seemed slow-paced at times, especially with the dialogue between the Grim Reaper and Bill. Also, you may want to add a few more jokes here and there in order to gain more interest from the viewer. I'm not saying that it was dull, just that it could have been more humorous.

Still, the Ping-Pong match was entertaining and impressive.

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Ilssm responds:

Ha, thanks! Yeah, I'm working a bit more on the jokes now, trying to make them more clever instead of 'l0l rAndum' kind of things.

I also realize the dialogue can be a bit slow in some places, I'll fix that in the next few episodes as well.

Thanks for the review!

This was rather funny seeing as Grim Reaper decided to play a fair game and let Bill himself decide through something he's good at if he would live or die.

The animation is still with MS Paint as usual so nothing has really changed. I do, however, look forward to the day you can afford and purchase Adobe Flash so you can make even better animations unless you plan to keep using MS Paint for a long time.

The voice acting was good once more. The pong sound and controller mashing was also a nice little soundly addition. The ending song was good to hear. Which brings up another point, should try to link to the song in the Credits & Info on all of these unless the song is no longer in the audio portal.

Overall, another nice piece in the Kyle & Bill series.

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Ilssm responds:

Hey! I keep planning to use paint to finish at least the first season, a total of hopefully ten episodes. Thanks for the review! :)

It was same as ussual, however the whooshing was a little overuse but Im not going complain about that, however for some reason Im experiencing some lag with the video while watching it.

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Ilssm responds:

It's not you, it's me. Near the end it gets terribly out of sync. I'm trying to work on this problem as we speak.

neat idea but some of the posing was too stiff , ex, the reaper holding the sythe. keep sketching to improve your drawings... cheers

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Ilssm responds:

The drawing isn't supposed to be amazing, the animation is just there to be there. 75% is about the writing. Thanks for the review though.

Awesome 5 for the save

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: D

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3.71 / 5.00

Nov 3, 2012
12:49 PM EDT
Comedy - Original