The way he (or she, it's hard to tell) holds his/her gun seems awkward. It would make more sense if his/her right arm was lower and his/her left arm higher with his/her elbow pointing down instead of backwards. The current way he/she holds the gun isn't relaxed enough, basically. Everything else seems cool, especially the mysterious feeling that something it hiding in the facility.
Looks like you were inspired by Halo and Dead Space... Nice short thou.
Like everyone else says, the running looks weird. And why is he running anyways?
It was definitely creepy when the guy shows up behind him. It would have been creepier if the mystery guy didn't look exactly like the first guy, except with a darker uniform.
And I didn't think the shotgun fit in with the rest of the setup. You have a super-high tech guy in a super-high tech facility. Say, 50-100 years in the future. So he's carrying a 50-100 year old shotgun, which is a low-tech weapon to begin with.
More of this please, more. I know you state that there will be but honestly im excited !
Same as the others,I also think that the running could be improved,same with the way hes holding his Spas-12..now there is only one scary question..
Who was that "thing" behind the character?God it reminds me of this one stick series where the people enter this freaky cursed castle..