Sonic Adventures: Formed Enemies This Episode is the first in newgrounds for more information and see all my full series of Sonic Adventures: Formed Enemies at:
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Credits:
Written and Directed: Alvc57
Programs used: Macromedia Flash Pro. 8, Adobe Photoshop
Sprites: The Mystical Forest Zone, The Spriters-Resource, The Shyguy Kingdom.
Music: Dragon Ball Z Theme, Trunks Story - DBZ Trunks Compendium, Sonic Adventure 2 - City Escape, The Doomsday Zone - Project Chaos, Bruce Faulconer - Devastation Theme
Sprites:
Sonic - The Mystical Forest Zone
Shadow - The Shyguy Kingdom, The Mystical Forest Zone, Edited by Shadow333.
Tails - The Mystical Forest Zone
Knuckles: The Mystical Forest Zone
Demon Sonic: Unknown
Aeon: BlackDevilX
Thanks For Watching!!!!
Actually, Aeon the Hedgehog belongs to me, not BlackDevilX. He uses my character with my permission.
That aside, this flash seems like a bad hash of everything that's WRONG with sprite/Sonic flash animations. Unoriginal character design for the "uberboss", generic storyline, horrible DBZ EVERYTHING... You can do much better. Keep practicing, and look for some new resources, because SMBZ and FFSX beat DBZ shit into the dirt. e_e
hmm ok good nice movie
yeah not bad not bad i like where its going...however there is grammar mistakes which are quite apparent and a few spelling mistakes which arent too much of a problem... but not bad
OK after i watched this i had to do some searching before i could write this review so here it is:
1) what is with the grammar here? it seems like the only line that was said properly was "what the heck was that" after that it was all to your know how of piecing it together.
2)Demon Sonic...who the heck is he? I've never seen him but the dialog made it appear that he was a known antagonist with sonic so that's a bit confusing there.
The main reason i gave you 0 stars
3)Now...for Aeon... i don't know if you know me but i was one of the few people that know what you did with Alven's Preview of SMBZ ep9 so i am hoping you did not use another person's work with out there permission to do so and put it under your name yet again,this time not giving credit to who actually made Aeon. If this is true then you have gone too far for me.
Yeah, nothing new or interesting here.
1st: The usual dbz music that is used in every sprite fight flash. Including ones that were used in SMBZ. People need to stop doing this.
2nd: The grammar definitely needs work.
3rd: Some sfx that were needed weren't heard. Such as when sonic and 'demon sonic' were fighting, at points you couldn't hear them fighting even though they were punching and kicking each other.
4th: I'm not sure if you had his permission or not, but I'm pretty sure Aeon belongs to BlackDevilX who had recently just made his return to NGs.
Overall, definitely needs work. Not that entertaining story-wise (I mean everyone in there had the common phrase of "What the heck was that?!") and indeed I am asking...what the heck was that? You can improve on it though. Animation, Sound, SFX, and Storyline, nowhere to go but up right?
