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This is my first real animation, I have been working on it for about a month. feedback would be appreciated!

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you don't seem to accept critique, or do you? as i can see you don't. even though you said feedback would be appreciated. I couldn't have said it better than SCTE3. But your answer was just rude. He found the time to write a review that good with advice and everything and you were just a jerk.
This is the most horrible flash i have seen on newgrounds until now. I'm sorry but that's how i see it. I hope you find the time to read SCTE3's comment and take his advice. It'll be worth it.

The worst thing about this flash is the music. Too loud!

And how do they run. You can't even call it like that.
I don't get why this wasn't blammed.

HonkGronkers responds:

I hoped for constructive critisism, there is no need to freak out. Instead of saying that it's bad, why don't you tell me how to improve? You are very rude. I plan on releasing more animations soon, I hope that they will have more helpful reviews than this one. P.S. don't insult others when you can't do better yourself.

nice , keep trying

HonkGronkers responds:

Thanks man, will do!

Haha! Love it and it gave me a laugh :D Only youtube poopers know the joke :D

And for people who don't understand a sh*t, look here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W6NPJf 6iEhw

HonkGronkers responds:

Thanks man, I put a lot of effort into it and it's nice to know people appreciate it.

the animation is horrible, and not funny, since the bad framerate covered up the flash itaelf.
Very poorly made

HonkGronkers responds:

Well it doesn't seem like you have any submissions so you can suck my nuts, loser.

0 Scored and .5/5 Reviewed

Poorly put together and mashed with poorly edited audio clips. It's obvious this is some kind of joke but it is lost on me. My question to you is, why waste at least an hour of YOUR time to waste 30 sec of mine? Flash creator, writers, artists, and hell pretty much any basic form of entertainment is always targeted towards the common goal of inspiring, and entertaining their viewers/readers. You did neither and you waste time by showing zero effort. If this is what's funny to you, you should simply uninstall flash as it was clearly a waste of money. Draw with a bit more effort to make the background and characters a little more appealing, that's a start, you did, at least, make some half assed attempt to match the voices with the mouth movements, so here, A whole half star and a half a star too many.

- Hollow -

HonkGronkers responds:

I am sorry that you feel that way. I never said that I am an expert animator, this is my first real flash. I was looking for advice, tips and points to improve on. I will get better over time and I hope that you see my next animations for they will be much better. You may enjoy striking down newcomers, but I won't let your harsh comments stop me from pursuing animation.

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Aug 21, 2012
6:47 PM EDT