This was abysmal quality. The animation was poor the voicing was bad and the story was very lame.
Keep trying but try harder and get some more friends involved and plan things out etc.

Try to be proffesional.

Subs are mis-spelt, not complete and change too fast
Music plays before video begins and will play over other sound if video is played a second time

The black screen with what i assume is the song title is very sudden and in the wrong place, credits go at the end

This only gets the half a star because i like the song, though you didnt create that so it shouldnt really count...

This is the better than others you made.