I was totally fine with the video, until the poop joke (which you make it seem that was the entire joke of this film...
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Continue working on your animation skills, although it's better than Blam...
To make it better, defiantly update the jokes you use. And if this is going to be your style, practice refining it, because it will make your videos much better.
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The idea of Simon singing his own game music is funny, cause I find myself doing that to games I play XD
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Not much else to say, but keep working for better works, and hope your future works are of better quality.
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P.S. (I lied last sentence, I do want to type one last thing) Thanks for adding a menu, makes life a lot easier to review :D