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Jokes - Elevator Blues

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Latest installment to the Jokes series. It is a short joke about what elevators talk about when people are not around and how they feel when we ride on them.

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Meh. Not bad, but could be improved.

There are four big problems that I can see:

*The into needs serious improvement.
*I haven't seen the others, but this joke is pretty corny. Not always a problem, but you have to know how to make it funny.
*You should add more jokes to each submission, and make it go by a bit faster.
*The animation is sort of bad.

You will improve overtime. I don't make videos myself, so I can't teach you any new techniques.

You have an idea, but perhaps imporving your technique could make things better. For instance, maybe a shorter intro or smoother drawings.

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1,704
Votes
3
Score
1.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 20, 2012
11:23 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original