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This is the first Flash animation I've done. I'm a pretty good drawer and I guess I wanted to try something new. For some reason the audio doesn't work and I used an exclusive type of program to make this.
Original and creative
A well drawn animation, but definitely could stand to evolve. Definitely add some more color into your next one, it'll really help your drawing ability to stand out.
Also work on adding some more subject matter into your animations whether it be parody, a series or even a longer animation like this one, just with more content. Voice acting isn't even totally necessary if you choose to imply your subject through well placed facial expressions and actions/body language of the characters.
In any case, you definitely have talent, keep it up. Overall Good C+
deXXaReDD responds:
I use no color on it as a unique style. Thanks anyway for the advice.
uniquely styled and fun to watch, great animating talent you've got
Pretty damn good for a first. You're not lying aboput being a good artist, in fact the art was great, but the actual flash itself, while nice and smooth, is very amateur. Keep working on it and I'm sure you'll become an excellent flash artist.